Monday, March 8, 2010

Drowning

doubt is my struggle
it places me at sea,
i try to stay a float,
but my hearts pains too heavy.
my heart wont let me float
and doubt wants me to sink
i cant find faiths life-boat,
moving in a frantic
i cant seem to think.

i could drown now
and give it all to the sea,
are i could somehow
find confidence to set my heart free....
...from doubt

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful. You're very creative. As I think I've stated before, I feel like I can relate to a lot of your poems.

Don't drown *smile*.

I hope you're doing okay.

x

Coco said...

Thank you, but the post you commented on were lyrics to a Sam Cooke song. But I do write my own stuff in here, too.

I like what you wrote here though. Felt this way before so many times. It's beautiful